[10:12 PM] Jaimee and I took apart one of my short stories, bit by painful bit. The goal was a better shortstory overall, and hopefully (when I revise it) that goal will be met. The story is pretty good... a little weird, but that's typical of me...

I'll have the story revised probably sunday morning (maybe?). We'll just have to see.

I need to get a link section working...
yeah...
alright, have fun everyone...